T2+My+Righting

__Monday 4 july__

The Dragon

My name is Carter Jones. I’m a 12 year old boy with dark brown hair, blue eyes, lots of freckles and am the shortest in my class mostly because almost everyone in my class are big apes. I’m reasonably fit, with a wild imagination which sometimes runs away with me. I live on the edge of Washington with my Mum, my Dad died in a car crash when I was young. Here is my story about the dragon that changed my life which unfortunately no one believes.

“Carter! Come clean up this mess!” “Coming mum”. “I thought you said you were going to clean this up two hours ago” said Miss Jones. “I was but I kind of got distracted” said Carter. “I’m getting tired of your distractions you keep getting”. “What was it this time” said Miss Jones. “I thought I saw something move under my bed that was green and scaly it turn out to be one of my old toys” Carter said quietly. “Ok then clean up this mess dinner will be ready in a minute. Miss Jones walked out and Carter got to work on the mess.

“Good night Carter” Miss Jones said quietly. “Good night Mum” whispers Carter. Miss Jones leaves the room, Carter sighs and stares out the window. Something catches his eye something in the distance just outside washington something huge, it moved, took off in to the air and disappeared. “That was not a plane or a helicopter it had legs and a head it has to be a dragon but dragons don’t exist” carter whispered to him self. Then a 3 second flash appears where it disappeared. “Yep diffidently a dragon” said Carter. BOOM! An explosion happens where the dragon was. “Oh no I’ve got to see this” Carter whispered to himself. As he crept past his mums room he accidentally knocked the pot plant off its little table. he slowly turned to face his mums room, Miss Jones was standing in the door way. “And where do you think you’re going” Miss Jones asked a little annoyed. “I’m going to see what made the explosion outside” Carter said quietly. “No you’re not it’s a school night go back to bed” said Miss Jones. “Ok” carter said a little disheartened and went to bed and fell asleep.

Carter sits down and starts to eat his breakfast. “Carter! Come see this” Miss Jones yells from the living room. Coming mum! Carter yells back. Carter walks in to the living room and sees whats on the TV. “Todays breaking news, a plane has crash landed on the way to Washington” said the news reporter. “luckily no one was killed, we found that the front of the plane was almost completely melted, the pilot claims that something shot fire at them” explained the reporter. “The Dragon” Carter whispered to himself. “Mum I’m going to go to school now!” Carter shouts as he runs out the door.

Bbbbbrrrrrrrriiiiiiiinnnnngggg! go’s the school bell. “ok everybody sit down today were going to talk about the plane crash that happened last night, does anyone have an idea of what might of happened, Susan Macnol” The Teacher said. “Well I think that the front of the plane over heated causing it to melt” said Susan. Susan Macnol is the smart one of the class,a real know it all, she has short blond hair, green eyes, really pail skin, and wears over sized glasses, she’s really annoying and a real showoff. even though Carter didn’t have his hand up the teacher still picked him. “Carter what do you think happened to the plane” the teacher said. “Ummmm” Carter said a little confused, and decided to be honest about what he saw. “I think it might have been a dragon” carter said kind of embarrassed. the class cracked up laughing at him. “Carter! I will not have this kind of irresponsible comments in my class, go to the principles office now, Carter moaned.

Carter walked out the door of the principles office. “Aw man I got a detention all because of that stupid dragon I saw last night”Carter said really annoyed. Kaitlin Lotch came running up behind him yelling “Carter”, Kaitlin Lotch had long brown hair, brown eyes, freckles on her nose, was about twenty center meters taller then Carter, and lived next door to him. Carter turn around, “What do you want, to laugh at me some more” Carter said annoyed. “No I came to tell you that I believe you” Kaitlin said out of breath. Carter was very surprised to here that. “really? why?” Carter said very confused. “Because I saw it to you’re not the only one with a room at the back of the house” Kaitlin said as if he was an idiot. “Oh right”Carter said remembering that she was his next door neighbor. “besides I have something you don’t, proof” she said as she pulled out a camera from her bag. “My proof” Kaitlin said very proud of her self. “Yea but how are we going to prove that’s a dragon people might think that it’s just the plane, well I’m going home” Carter said.

“How was your day today” Miss Jones said cheerly. “I don’t want to talk about it” Carter said feeling down. “what happened” Miss Jones said feeling bad for him. “I said I don’t want to talk about it” Carter said as he walked to his room. As soon as he got in to his room he locked his door and grabbed an empty back pack and jumped out the window. “luckily the dragon wasn’t to far from my house” Carter said to him self. Carter ran into the shed and pulled out his bike, his bike was sprayed painted black, and had lots of dents from prevues crashes (he wasn’t the best bike rider). Carter sped towards where he saw the dragon last, hoping to find some proof that it was a dragon.

Kaitlin was downloading her pitchers on to the computer to take a closer look at them. “I don’t understand theres got to be some way of proving that it’s a dragon in the photo, hang on a moment what’s this” Kaitlin said zooming in to the black spot under the dragon. “It could just be a bird, but birds have wings and this is almost perfectly round, it must be a scale” said Kaitlin. “but just to be sure I need to investigate but first I need an excuse, ah-ha, Rosy!” Yells Kaitlin. In runs a small black dog, Rosy starts chasing her tail. “Mum! Can I take Rosy out for a walk! Kaitlin yells from her room. Ok! But don’t take to long! Miss Lotch yelled back. But instead of walking down the street like her Mum thinks she’s doing she turns round and go’s around the house to look for the scale.

When she got there she saw Carters dented bike. “Carter’s here?”Kaitlin said under her breath. After she sent Rosy back home she began to look around, not far in to her search she spotted Carter looking around on the ground. “Hey Carter” she yelled. Carter almost jumped out of his skin. “What are you doing here” he yelled back “Same as you but I actually know what I’m looking for” she said proudly “What do you mean” carter said in a confused way “On one of the pitchers I saw something falling from the dragon I think it might of been one of it’s scales” she said like it was so obvious “how do you know that it’s not just a bird” he said. she didn’t answer and carried on searching. ”Well you can carrie on searching I’m just going to sit here until you’re done” he said as sat down on an unusual rock. she looked up at him with an annoyed look on her face, then it turn in to surprise. “Carter you found it” she said with a happy tone in her voice. “Really were?” he said while looking around him “you’re siting on it” she said with a slight sinker and sure enough there it was, a jagged, scarlet black scale, harder then diamond, and bigger than Carter and Kaitlin put together. Carter said in a slightly worried voice” I think we should keep this a secret”. “What! the hole world should know about this!” she snapped back, “Why do you want to keep this a secret?” “Do you really want people running around after a giant dragon with scales harder then diamond?” he said “oh um then what are we serpost to do with the scale then” she said “I’v got an idea, now come on help me roll it” Carter said

“This is the worst idea I’ve ever herd!” she yelled at him. “What it’s the perfect place, my parents don’t use the shed any way” he observed. they were standing in front of old rusty rundown shed which could only just fit the scale in it. “ok maybe it’s a little run down, but it works” Carter said defending himself. they started to push and shove to get the scale inside, it took ten minuets before it finally went in. “that should take care of that” carter said “it’s getting late you better get going home before your mum starts to wonder where you are. “Ok but tell me before you go runing off with out me” she yelled as she ran round the cornor of the house

__Friday 24 june__

Cody your story is progressing well, it is important that you have a scaffold/picture in your head of how your story is going to finish (sword, dragon rolling eyes, rock falling as discussed). You have lots of good dialogue in your writing.

**MY LEARNING TARGETS - Working towards Level 4**

My next step in writing is to use punctuation correctly when using dialogue e.g. A new line when someone is speaking including speech tag and action (see red example). Wiki does not show the indent but make sure it is in your pages document.

I will achieve this by following each person carefully and making sure they have their own lines.

The Dragon

My name is Carter Jones. I’m a 12 year old boy with dark brown hair, blue eyes, lots of freckles and am the shortest in my class mostly because almost everyone in my class are big apes. I’m reasonably fit, with a wild imagination which sometimes runs away with me. I live on the edge of Washington with my Mum, my Dad died in a car crash when I was young. Here is my story about the dragon that changed my life which unfortunately no one believes.

“Carter! Come clean up this mess!” “Coming mum”. “I thought you said you were going to clean this up two hours ago” said Miss Jones. “I was but I kind of got distracted” said Carter. “I’m getting tired of your distractions you keep getting”. “What was it this time” said Miss Jones. “I thought I saw something move under my bed that was green and scaly it turn out to be one of my old toys” Carter said quietly. “Ok then clean up this mess dinner will be ready in a minute. Miss Jones walked out and Carter got to work on the mess.

“Good night Carter” Miss Jones said quietly. “Good night Mum” whispers Carter. Miss Jones leaves the room, Carter sighs and stares out the window. Something catches his eye something in the distance just outside Washington something huge. It moved, took off in to the air and disappeared. “That was not a plane or a helicopter, it had legs and a head it has to be a dragon but dragons don’t exist” carter whispered to him self. Then a 3 second flash appears where it disappeared. “Yep diffidently a dragon” said Carter. BOOM! An explosion happens where the dragon was. “Oh no I’ve got to see this” Carter whispered to himself. As he crept past his mums room he accidentally knocked the pot plant off its little table. He slowly turned to face his mums room, Miss Jones was standing in the door way. “And where do you think you’re going”? Miss Jones asked a little annoyed. “I’m going to see what made the explosion outside” Carter said quietly. “No you’re not it’s a school night go back to bed” said Miss Jones. “Ok” carter said a little disheartened and went to bed and fell asleep.

Carter sits down and starts to eat his breakfast. “Carter! Come see this” Miss Jones yells from the living room. Coming mum! Carter yells back. Carter walks in to the living room and sees whats on the TV. “Todays breaking news, a plane has crash landed on the way to Washington” said the news reporter. “luckily no one was killed, we found that the front of the plane was almost completely melted, the pilot claims that something shot fire at them” explained the reporter. “The Dragon” Carter whispered to himself. “Mum I’m going to go to school now!” Carter shouts as he runs out the door.

Bbbbbrrrrrrrriiiiiiiinnnnngggg! go’s the school bell. “ok everybody sit down today were going to talk about the plane crash that happened last night, does anyone have an idea of what might of happened, Susan Macnol” The Teacher said. “Well I think that the front of the plane over heated causing it to melt” said Susan. Susan Macnol is the smart one of the class, she has short blond hair, green eyes, really pail skin, and wears over sized glasses, she’s really annoying and a real showoff. even though Carter didn’t have his hand up the teacher still picked him. “Carter what do you think happened to the plane” the teacher said. “Ummmm” Carter said a little confused, and decided to be honest about what he saw. “I think it might have been a dragon” carter said kind of embarrassed. the class cracked up laughing at him. “Carter! I will not have this kind of irresponsible comments in my class, go to the principles office now, Carter moaned.

Carter walked out the door of the principles office. “Aw man I got a detention all because of that stupid dragon I saw last night”Carter said really annoyed. Kaitlin Lotch came running up behind him yelling “Carter”, Kaitlin Lotch had long brown hair, brown eyes, freckles on her nose, was about twenty center meters taller then Carter, and lived next door to him. Carter turn around, “What do you want, to laugh at me some more” Carter said annoyed. “No I came to tell you that I believe you” Kaitlin said out of breath. Carter was very surprised to here that. “really? why?” Carter said very confused. “Because I saw it to you’re not the only one with a room at the back of the house” Kaitlin said as if he was an idiot. “Oh right”Carter said remembering that she was his next door neighbor. “besides I have something you don’t, proof” she said as she pulled out a camera from her bag. “My proof” Kaitlin said very proud of her self. “Yea but how are we going to prove that’s a dragon people might think that it’s just the plane, well I’m going home” Carter said.

“How was your day today” Miss Jones said cheerly. “I don’t want to talk about it” Carter said feeling down. “what happened” Miss Jones said feeling bad for him. “I said I don’t want to talk about it” Carter said as he walked to his room. As soon as he got in to his room he locked his door and grabbed an empty back pack and jumped out the window. “luckily the dragon wasn’t to far from my house” Carter said to him self. Carter ran into the shed and pulled out his bike, his bike was sprayed painted black, and had lots of dents from prevues crashes (he wasn’t the best bike rider). Carter sped towards where he saw the dragon last, hoping to find some proof that it was a dragon.

Kaitlin was downloading her pitchers on to the computer to take a closer look at them. “I don’t understand theres got to be some way of proving that it’s a dragon in the photo, hang on a moment what’s this” Kaitlin said zooming in to the black spot under the dragon. “It could just be a bird, but birds have wings and this is almost perfectly round, it must be a scale” said Kaitlin. “but just to be sure I need to investigate but first I need an excuse, ah-ha, Rosy!” Yells Kaitlin. In runs a small black dog, Rosy starts chasing her tail. “Mum! Can I take Rosy out for a walk! Kaitlin yells from her room. Ok! But don’t take to long! Miss Lotch yelled back. But instead of walking down the street like her Mum thinks she’s doing she turns round and go’s around the house to look for the scale.

When she got there she saw Carters dented bike. “Carter’s here?”Kaitlin said under her breath. she began to look around, not far in to her search she spotted Carter looking around on the ground. “Hey Carter” she yelled. Carter almost jumped out of his skin. “What are you doing here” he yelled back “Same as you but I actually know what I’m looking for” she said proudly “What do you mean” carter said in a confused way “On one of the pitchers I saw something falling from the dragon I think it might of been one of it’s scales” she said like it was so obvious “how do you know that it’s not just a bird” he said. she didn’t answer and carried on searching. ”Well you can carrie on searching I’m just going to sit here until you’re done” he said as sat down on an unusual rock. she looked up at him with an annoyed look on her face, then it turn in to surprise. “Carter you found it” she said with a happy tone in her voice. “Really were?” he said while looking around him “you’re siting on it” she said with a slight sinker and sure enough there it was, a jagged, scarlet black scale, harder then diamond, and bigger than Carter and Kaitlin put together. Carter said in a slightly worried voice” I think we should keep this a secret”. “What! the hole world should know about this!” she snapped back, “Why do you want to keep this a secret?” “Do you really want people running around after a giant dragon with scales harder then diamond?” he said “oh um then what are we serpost to do with the scale then” she said “I’v got an idea, now come on help me roll it” Carter said

“This is the worst idea I’ve ever herd!” she yelled at him. “What it’s the perfect place, my parents don’t use the shed any way” he observed. they were standing in front of old rusty rundown shed which could only just fit the scale in it. “ok maybe it’s a little run down, but it works” Carter said defending himself. they started to push and shove to get the scale inside, it took ten minuets before it finally went in. “that should take care of that” carter said “it’s getting late you better get going home before your mum starts to wonder where you are

__Tuesday 23 june__

The Dragon

My name is Carter Jones. I’m a 12 year old boy with dark brown hair, blue eyes, lots of freckles and am the shortest in my class mostly because almost everyone in my class are big apes. I’m reasonably fit, with a wild imagination which sometimes runs away with me. I live on the edge of Washington with my Mum, my Dad died in a car crash when I was young. Here is my story about the dragon that changed my life which unfortunately no one believes.

“Carter! Come clean up this mess!” “Coming mum”. “I thought you said you were going to clean this up two hours ago” said Miss Jones. “I was but I kind of got distracted” said Carter. “I’m getting tired of your distractions you keep getting”. “What was it this time” said Miss Jones. “I thought I saw something move under my bed that was green and scaly it turn out to be one of my old toys” Carter said quietly. “Ok then clean up this mess dinner will be ready in a minute. Miss Jones walked out and Carter got to work on the mess.

“Good night Carter” Miss Jones said quietly. “Good night Mum” whispers Carter. Miss Jones leaves the room, Carter sighs and stares out the window. Something catches his eye something in the distance just outside washington something huge, it moved, took off in to the air and disappeared. “That was not a plane or a helicopter it had legs and a head it has to be a dragon but dragons don’t exist” carter whispered to him self. Then a 3 second flash appears where it disappeared. “Yep diffidently a dragon” said Carter. BOOM! An explosion happens where the dragon was. “Oh no I’ve got to see this” Carter whispered to himself. As he crept past his mums room he accidentally knocked the pot plant off its little table. he slowly turned to face his mums room, Miss Jones was standing in the door way. “And where do you think you’re going” Miss Jones asked a little annoyed. “I’m going to see what made the explosion outside” Carter said quietly. “No you’re not it’s a school night go back to bed” said Miss Jones. “Ok” carter said a little disheartened and went to bed and fell asleep.

Carter sits down and starts to eat his breakfast. “Carter! Come see this” Miss Jones yells from the living room. Coming mum! Carter yells back. Carter walks in to the living room and sees whats on the TV. “Todays breaking news, a plane has crash landed on the way to Washington” said the news reporter. “luckily no one was killed, we found that the front of the plane was almost completely melted, the pilot claims that something shot fire at them” explained the reporter. “The Dragon” Carter whispered to himself. “Mum I’m going to go to school now!” Carter shouts as he runs out the door.

Bbbbbrrrrrrrriiiiiiiinnnnngggg! go’s the school bell. “ok everybody sit down today were going to talk about the plane crash that happened last night, does anyone have an idea of what might of happened, Susan Macnol” The Teacher said. “Well I think that the front of the plane over heated causing it to melt” said Susan. Susan Macnol is the smart one of the class, she has short blond hair, green eyes, really pail skin, and wears over sized glasses, she’s really annoying and a real showoff. even though Carter didn’t have his hand up the teacher still picked him. “Carter what do you think happened to the plane” the teacher said. “Ummmm” Carter said a little confused, and decided to be honest about what he saw. “I think it might have been a dragon” carter said kind of embarrassed. the class cracked up laughing at him. “Carter! I will not have this kind of irresponsible comments in my class, go to the principles office now, Carter moaned.

Carter walked out the door of the principles office. “Aw man I got a detention all because of that stupid dragon I saw last night”Carter said really annoyed. Kaitlin Lotch came running up behind him yelling “Carter”, Kaitlin Lotch had long brown hair, brown eyes, freckles on her nose, was about twenty center meters taller then Carter, and lived next door to him. Carter turn around, “What do you want, to laugh at me some more” Carter said annoyed. “No I came to tell you that I believe you” Kaitlin said out of breath. Carter was very surprised to here that. “really? why?” Carter said very confused. “Because I saw it to you’re not the only one with a room at the back of the house” Kaitlin said as if he was an idiot. “Oh right”Carter said remembering that she was his next door neighbor. “besides I have something you don’t, proof” she said as she pulled out a camera from her bag. “My proof” Kaitlin said very proud of her self. “Yea but how are we going to prove that’s a dragon people might think that it’s just the plane, well I’m going home” Carter said.

“How was your day today” Miss Jones said cheerly. “I don’t want to talk about it” Carter said feeling down. “what happened” Miss Jones said feeling bad for him. “I said I don’t want to talk about it” Carter said as he walked to his room. As soon as he got in to his room he locked his door and grabbed an empty back pack and jumped out the window. “luckily the dragon wasn’t to far from my house” Carter said to him self. Carter ran into the shed and pulled out his bike, his bike was sprayed painted black, and had lots of dents from prevues crashes (he wasn’t the best bike rider). Carter sped towards where he saw the dragon last, hoping to find some proof that it was a dragon.

Kaitlin was downloading her pitchers on to the computer to take a closer look at them. “I don’t understand theres got to be some way of proving that it’s a dragon in the photo, hang on a moment what’s this” Kaitlin said zooming in to the black spot under the dragon. “It could just be a bird, but birds have wings and this is almost perfectly round, it must be a scale” said Kaitlin. “but just to be sure I need to investigate but first I need an excuse, ah-ha, Rosy!” Yells Kaitlin. In runs a small black dog, Rosy starts chasing her tail. “Mum! Can I take Rosy out for a walk! Kaitlin yells from her room. Ok! But don’t take to long! Miss Lotch yelled back. But instead of walking down the street like her Mum thinks she’s doing she turns round and go’s around the house to look for the scale.

When she got there she saw Carters dented bike. “Carter’s here?”Kaitlin said under her breath. she began to look around, not far in to her search she spotted Carter looking around on the ground. “Hey Carter” she yelled. Carter almost jumped out of his skin. “What are you doing here” he yelled back “Same as you but I actually know what I’m looking for” she said proudly “What do you mean” carter said in a confused way “On one of the pitchers I saw something falling from the dragon I think it might of been one of it’s scales” she said like it was so obvious “how do you know that it’s not just a bird” he said. she didn’t answer and carried on searching. ”Well you can carrie on searching I’m just going to sit here until you’re done” he said as sat down on an unusual rock. she looked up at him with an annoyed look on her face, then it turn in to surprise. “Carter you found it” she said with a happy tone in her voice. “Really were?” he said while looking around him “you’re siting on it” she said with a slight sinker and sure enough there it was, a jagged, scarlet black scale, harder then diamond, and bigger than Carter and Kaitlin put together. Carter said in a slightly worried voice” I think we should keep this a secret”. “What! the hole world should know about this!” she snapped back, “Why do you want to keep this a secret?” “Do you really want people running around after a giant dragon with scales harder then diamond?” he said “oh um then what are we serpost to do with the scale then” she said “I’v got an idea, now come on help me roll it” Carter said

“This is the worst idea I’ve ever herd!” she yelled at him. “What it’s the perfect place, my parents don’t use the shed any way” he observed. they were standing in front of old rusty rundown shed which could only just fit the scale in it.

__wednesday 22 june__

The Dragon

My name is Carter Jones. I’m a 12 year old boy with dark brown hair, blue eyes, lots of freckles and am the shortest in my class mostly because almost everyone in my class are big apes. I’m reasonably fit, with a wild imagination which sometimes runs away with me. I live on the edge of Washington with my Mum, my Dad died in a car crash when I was young. Here is my story about the dragon that changed my life which unfortunately no one believes.

“Carter! Come clean up this mess!” “Coming mum”. “I thought you said you were going to clean this up two hours ago” said Miss Jones. “I was but I kind of got distracted” said Carter. “I’m getting tired of your distractions you keep getting”. “What was it this time” said Miss Jones. “I thought I saw something move under my bed that was green and scaly it turn out to be one of my old toys” Carter said quietly. “Ok then clean up this mess dinner will be ready in a minute. Miss Jones walked out and Carter got to work on the mess.

“Good night Carter” Miss Jones said quietly. “Good night Mum” whispers Carter. Miss Jones leaves the room, Carter sighs and stares out the window. Something catches his eye something in the distance just outside washington something huge, it moved, took off in to the air and disappeared. “That was not a plane or a helicopter it had legs and a head it has to be a dragon but dragons don’t exist” carter whispered to him self. Then a 3 second flash appears where it disappeared. “Yep diffidently a dragon” said Carter. BOOM! An explosion happens where the dragon was. “Oh no I’ve got to see this” Carter whispered to himself. As he crept past his mums room he accidentally knocked the pot plant off its little table. he slowly turned to face his mums room, Miss Jones was standing in the door way. “And where do you think you’re going” Miss Jones asked a little annoyed. “I’m going to see what made the explosion outside” Carter said quietly. “No you’re not it’s a school night go back to bed” said Miss Jones. “Ok” carter said a little disheartened and went to bed and fell asleep.

Carter sits down and starts to eat his breakfast. “Carter! Come see this” Miss Jones yells from the living room. Coming mum! Carter yells back. Carter walks in to the living room and sees whats on the TV. “Todays breaking news, a plane has crash landed on the way to Washington” said the news reporter. “luckily no one was killed, we found that the front of the plane was almost completely melted, the pilot claims that something shot fire at them” explained the reporter. “The Dragon” Carter whispered to himself. “Mum I’m going to go to school now!” Carter shouts as he runs out the door.

Bbbbbrrrrrrrriiiiiiiinnnnngggg! go’s the school bell. “ok everybody sit down today were going to talk about the plane crash that happened last night, does anyone have an idea of what might of happened, Susan Macnol” The Teacher said. “Well I think that the front of the plane over heated causing it to melt” said Susan. Susan Macnol is the smart one of the class, she has short blond hair, green eyes, really pail skin, and wears over sized glasses, she’s really annoying and a real showoff. even though Carter didn’t have his hand up the teacher still picked him. “Carter what do you think happened to the plane” the teacher said. “Ummmm” Carter said a little confused, and decided to be honest about what he saw. “I think it might have been a dragon” carter said kind of embarrassed. the class cracked up laughing at him. “Carter! I will not have this kind of irresponsible comments in my class, go to the principles office now, Carter moaned.

Carter walked out the door of the principles office. “Aw man I got a detention all because of that stupid dragon I saw last night”Carter said really annoyed. Kaitlin Lotch came running up behind him yelling “Carter”, Kaitlin Lotch had long brown hair, brown eyes, freckles on her nose, was about twenty center meters taller then Carter, and lived next door to him. Carter turn around, “What do you want, to laugh at me some more” Carter said annoyed. “No I came to tell you that I believe you” Kaitlin said out of breath. Carter was very surprised to here that. “really? why?” Carter said very confused. “Because I saw it to you’re not the only one with a room at the back of the house” Kaitlin said as if he was an idiot. “Oh right”Carter said remembering that she was his next door neighbor. “besides I have something you don’t, proof” she said as she pulled out a camera from her bag. “My proof” Kaitlin said very proud of her self. “Yea but how are we going to prove that’s a dragon people might think that it’s just the plane, well I’m going home” Carter said.

“How was your day today” Miss Jones said cheerly. “I don’t want to talk about it” Carter said feeling down. “what happened” Miss Jones said feeling bad for him. “I said I don’t want to talk about it” Carter said as he walked to his room. As soon as he got in to his room he locked his door and grabbed an empty back pack and jumped out the window. “luckily the dragon wasn’t to far from my house” Carter said to him self. Carter ran into the shed and pulled out his bike, his bike was sprayed painted black, and had lots of dents from prevues crashes (he wasn’t the best bike rider). Carter sped towards where he saw the dragon last, hoping to find some proof that it was a dragon.

Kaitlin was downloading her pitchers on to the computer to take a closer look at them. “I don’t understand theres got to be some way of proving that it’s a dragon in the photo, hang on a moment what’s this” Kaitlin said zooming in to the black spot under the dragon. “It could just be a bird, but birds have wings and this is almost perfectly round, it must be a scale” said Kaitlin. “but just to be sure I need to investigate but first I need an excuse, ah-ha, Rosy!” Yells Kaitlin. In runs a small black dog, Rosy starts chasing her tail. “Mum! Can I take Rosy out for a walk! Kaitlin yells from her room. Ok! But don’t take to long! Miss Lotch yelled back. But instead of walking down the street like her Mum thinks she’s doing she turns round and go’s around the house to look for the scale.

When she got there she saw Carters dented bike. “Carter’s here?”Kaitlin said under her breath. she began to look around, not far in to her search she spotted Carter looking around on the ground. “Hey Carter” she yelled. Carter almost jumped out of his skin. “What are you doing here” he yelled back “Same as you but I actually know what I’m looking for” she said proudly “What do you mean” carter said in a confused way “On one of the pitchers I saw something falling from the dragon I think it might of been one of it’s scales” she said like it was so obvious “how do you know that it’s not just a bird” he said. she didn’t answer and carried on searching. ”Well you can carrie on searching I’m just going to sit here until you’re done” he said as sat down on an unusual rock. she looked up at him with an annoyed look on her face, then it turn in to surprise. “Carter you found it” she said with a happy tone in her voice. “Really were?” he said while looking around him “you’re siting on it” she said with a slight sinker and sure enough there it was, a jagged, scarlet black scale, harder then diamond, and bigger than Carter and Kaitlin put together. Carter said in a slightly worried voice” I think we should keep this a secret”. “What! the hole world should know about this!” she snapped back, “Why do you want to keep this a secret?” “Do you really want people running around after a giant dragon with scales harder then diamond” he said

__Tuesday 21 june__

The Dragon

My name is Carter Jones. I’m a 12 year old boy with dark brown hair, blue eyes, lots of freckles and am the shortest in my class mostly because almost everyone in my class are big apes. I’m reasonably fit, with a wild imagination which sometimes runs away with me. I live on the edge of Washington with my Mum, my Dad died in a car crash when I was young. Here is my story about the dragon that changed my life which unfortunately no one believes.

“Carter! Come clean up this mess!” “Coming mum”. “I thought you said you were going to clean this up two hours ago” said Miss Jones. “I was but I kind of got distracted” said Carter. “I’m getting tired of your distractions you keep getting”. “What was it this time” said Miss Jones. “I thought I saw something move under my bed that was green and scaly it turn out to be one of my old toys” Carter said quietly. “Ok then clean up this mess dinner will be ready in a minute. Miss Jones walked out and Carter got to work on the mess.

“Good night Carter” Miss Jones said quietly. “Good night Mum” whispers Carter. Miss Jones leaves the room, Carter sighs and stares out the window. Something catches his eye something in the distance just outside washington something huge, it moved, took off in to the air and disappeared. “That was not a plane or a helicopter it had legs and a head it has to be a dragon but dragons don’t exist” carter whispered to him self. Then a 3 second flash appears where it disappeared. “Yep diffidently a dragon” said Carter. BOOM! An explosion happens where the dragon was. “Oh no I’ve got to see this” Carter whispered to himself. As he crept past his mums room he accidentally knocked the pot plant off its little table. he slowly turned to face his mums room, Miss Jones was standing in the door way. “And where do you think you’re going” Miss Jones asked a little annoyed. “I’m going to see what made the explosion outside” Carter said quietly. “No you’re not it’s a school night go back to bed” said Miss Jones. “Ok” carter said a little disheartened and went to bed and fell asleep.

Carter sits down and starts to eat his breakfast. “Carter! Come see this” Miss Jones yells from the living room. Coming mum! Carter yells back. Carter walks in to the living room and sees whats on the TV. “Todays breaking news, a plane has crash landed on the way to Washington” said the news reporter. “luckily no one was killed, we found that the front of the plane was almost completely melted, the pilot claims that something shot fire at them” explained the reporter. “The Dragon” Carter whispered to himself. “Mum I’m going to go to school now!” Carter shouts as he runs out the door.

Bbbbbrrrrrrrriiiiiiiinnnnngggg! go’s the school bell. “ok everybody sit down today were going to talk about the plane crash that happened last night, does anyone have an idea of what might of happened, Susan Macnol” The Teacher said. “Well I think that the front of the plane over heated causing it to melt” said Susan. Susan Macnol is the smart one of the class, she has short blond hair, green eyes, really pail skin, and wears over sized glasses, she’s really annoying and a real showoff. even though Carter didn’t have his hand up the teacher still picked him. “Carter what do you think happened to the plane” the teacher said. “Ummmm” Carter said a little confused, and decided to be honest about what he saw. “I think it might have been a dragon” carter said kind of embarrassed. the class cracked up laughing at him. “Carter! I will not have this kind of irresponsible comments in my class, go to the principles office now, Carter moaned.

Carter walked out the door of the principles office. “Aw man I got a detention all because of that stupid dragon I saw last night”Carter said really annoyed. Kaitlin Lotch came running up behind him yelling “Carter”, Kaitlin Lotch had long brown hair, brown eyes, freckles on her nose, was about twenty center meters taller then Carter, and lived next door to him. Carter turn around, “What do you want, to laugh at me some more” Carter said annoyed. “No I came to tell you that I believe you” Kaitlin said out of breath. Carter was very surprised to here that. “really? why?” Carter said very confused. “Because I saw it to you’re not the only one with a room at the back of the house” Kaitlin said as if he was an idiot. “Oh right”Carter said remembering that she was his next door neighbor. “besides I have something you don’t, proof” she said as she pulled out a camera from her bag. “My proof” Kaitlin said very proud of her self. “Yea but how are we going to prove that’s a dragon people might think that it’s just the plane, well I’m going home” Carter said.

“How was your day today” Miss Jones said cheerly. “I don’t want to talk about it” Carter said feeling down. “what happened” Miss Jones said feeling bad for him. “I said I don’t want to talk about it” Carter said as he walked to his room. As soon as he got in to his room he locked his door and grabbed an empty back pack and jumped out the window. “luckily the dragon wasn’t to far from my house” Carter said to him self. Carter ran into the shed and pulled out his bike, his bike was sprayed painted black, and had lots of dents from prevues crashes (he wasn’t the best bike rider). Carter sped towards where he saw the dragon last, hoping to find some proof that it was a dragon.

Kaitlin was downloading her pitchers on to the computer to take a closer look at them. “I don’t understand theres got to be some way of proving that it’s a dragon in the photo, hang on a moment what’s this” Kaitlin said zooming in to the black spot under the dragon. “It could just be a bird, but birds have wings and this is almost perfectly round, it must be a scale” said Kaitlin. “but just to be sure I need to investigate but first I need an excuse, ah-ha, Rosy!” Yells Kaitlin. In runs a small black dog, Rosy starts chasing her tail. “Mum! Can I take Rosy out for a walk! Kaitlin yells from her room. Ok! But don’t take to long! Miss Lotch yelled back. But instead of walking down the street like her Mum thinks she’s doing she turns round and go’s around the house to look for the scale.

When she got there she saw Carters dented bike. “Carter’s here?”Kaitlin said under her breath. she began to look around, not far in to her search she spotted Carter looking around on the ground. “Hey Carter” she yelled. Carter almost jumped out of his skin. “What are you doing here” he yelled back “Same as you but I actually know what I’m looking for” she said proudly “What do you mean” carter said in a confused way “On one of the pitchers I saw something falling from the dragon I think it might of been one of it’s scales” she said like it was so obvious “how do you know that it’s not just a bird” he said. she didn’t answer and carried on searching. ”Well you can carrie on searching I’m just going to sit here until you’re done” he said as sat down on an unusual rock. she looked up at him with an annoyed look on her face, then it turn in to surprise. “Carter you found it” she said with a happy tone in her voice. “Really were?” he said while looking around him “you’re siting on it” she said with a slight sinker and sure enough there it was, a jagged, scarlet black scale, bigger than Carter and Kaitlin put together

__Monday 20 june__

The Dragon

My name is Carter Jones. I’m a 12 year old boy with dark brown hair, blue eyes, lots of freckles and am the shortest in my class mostly because almost everyone in my class are big apes. I’m reasonably fit, with a wild imagination which sometimes runs away with me. I live on the edge of Washington with my Mum, my Dad died in a car crash when I was young. Here is my story about the dragon that changed my life which unfortunately no one believes.

“Carter! Come clean up this mess!” “Coming mum”. “I thought you said you were going to clean this up two hours ago” said Miss Jones. “I was but I kind of got distracted” said Carter. “I’m getting tired of your distractions you keep getting”. “What was it this time” said Miss Jones. “I thought I saw something move under my bed that was green and scaly it turn out to be one of my old toys” Carter said quietly. “Ok then clean up this mess dinner will be ready in a minute. Miss Jones walked out and Carter got to work on the mess.

“Good night Carter” Miss Jones said quietly. “Good night Mum” whispers Carter. Miss Jones leaves the room, Carter sighs and stares out the window. Something catches his eye something in the distance just outside washington something huge, it moved, took off in to the air and disappeared. “That was not a plane or a helicopter it had legs and a head it has to be a dragon but dragons don’t exist” carter whispered to him self. Then a 3 second flash appears where it disappeared. “Yep diffidently a dragon” said Carter. BOOM! An explosion happens where the dragon was. “Oh no I’ve got to see this” Carter whispered to himself. As he crept past his mums room he accidentally knocked the pot plant off its little table. he slowly turned to face his mums room, Miss Jones was standing in the door way. “And where do you think you’re going” Miss Jones asked a little annoyed. “I’m going to see what made the explosion outside” Carter said quietly. “No you’re not it’s a school night go back to bed” said Miss Jones. “Ok” carter said a little disheartened and went to bed and fell asleep.

Carter sits down and starts to eat his breakfast. “Carter! Come see this” Miss Jones yells from the living room. Coming mum! Carter yells back. Carter walks in to the living room and sees whats on the TV. “Todays breaking news, a plane has crash landed on the way to Washington” said the news reporter. “luckily no one was killed, we found that the front of the plane was almost completely melted, the pilot claims that something shot fire at them” explained the reporter. “The Dragon” Carter whispered to himself. “Mum I’m going to go to school now!” Carter shouts as he runs out the door.

Bbbbbrrrrrrrriiiiiiiinnnnngggg! go’s the school bell. “ok everybody sit down today were going to talk about the plane crash that happened last night, does anyone have an idea of what might of happened, Susan Macnol” The Teacher said. “Well I think that the front of the plane over heated causing it to melt” said Susan. Susan Macnol is the smart one of the class, she has short blond hair, green eyes, really pail skin, and wears over sized glasses, she’s really annoying and a real showoff. even though Carter didn’t have his hand up the teacher still picked him. “Carter what do you think happened to the plane” the teacher said. “Aaaaaaa” Carter said a little confused, and decided to be honest about what he saw. “I think it might have been a dragon” carter said kind of embarrassed. the class cracked up laughing at him. “Carter! I will not have this kind of irresponsible comments in my class, go to the principles office now, Carter moaned.

Carter walked out the door of the principles office. “Aw man I got a detention all because of that stupid dragon I saw last night”Carter said really annoyed. Kaitlin Lotch came running up behind him yelling “Carter”, Kaitlin Lotch had long brown hair, brown eyes, freckles on her nose, was about twenty center meters taller then Carter, and lived next door to him. Carter turn around, “What do you want, to laugh at me some more” Carter said annoyed. “No I came to tell you that I believe you” Kaitlin said out of breath. Carter was very surprised to here that. “really? why?” Carter said very confused. “Because I saw it to you’re not the only one with a room at the back of the house” Kaitlin said as if he was an idiot. “Oh right”Carter said remembering that she was his next door neighbor. “besides I have something you don’t, proof” she said as she pulled out a camera from her bag. “My proof” Kaitlin said very proud of her self. “Yea but how are we going to prove that’s a dragon people might think that it’s just the plane, well I’m going home” Carter said.

“How was your day today” Miss Jones said cheerly. “I don’t want to talk about it” Carter said feeling down. “what happened” Miss Jones said feeling bad for him. “I said I don’t want to talk about it” Carter said as he walked to his room. As soon as he got in to his room he locked his door and grabbed an empty back pack and jumped out the window. “luckily the dragon wasn’t to far from my house” Carter said to him self. Carter ran into the shed and pulled out his bike, his bike was sprayed painted black, and had lots of dents from prevues crashes (he wasn’t the best bike rider). Carter sped towards where he saw the dragon last, hoping to find some proof that it was a dragon.

Kaitlin was downloading her pitchers on to the computer to take a closer look at them. “I don’t understand theres got to be some way of proving that it’s a dragon in the photo, hang on a moment what’s this” Kaitlin said zooming in to the black spot under the dragon. “It could just be a bird, but birds have wings and this is almost perfectly round, it must be a scale” said Kaitlin. “but just to be sure I need to investigate but first I need an excuse, ah-ha, Rosy!” Yells Kaitlin. In runs a small black dog, Rosy starts chasing her tail. “Mum! Can I take Rosy out for a walk! Kaitlin yells from her room. Ok! But don’t take to long! Miss Lotch yelled back. But instead of walking down the street like her Mum thinks she’s doing she turns round and go’s around the house to look for the scale.

When she got there she saw Carters dented bike. “Carter’s here?”Kaitlin said under her breath. she began to look around, not far in to her search she spotted Carter looking around on the ground. “Hey Carter” she yelled. Carter almost jumped out of his skin. “What are you doing here” he yelled back “Same as you but I actually know what I’m looking for” she said proudly “What do you mean” carter said in a confused way “On one of the pitchers I saw something falling from the dragon I think it might of been one of it’s scales” she said like it was so obvious

__Wednesday 15 june__

The Dragon

My name is Carter Jones. I’m a 12 year old boy with dark brown hair, blue eyes, lots of freckles and am the shortest in my class mostly because almost everyone in my class are big apes. I’m reasonably fit, with a wild imagination which sometimes runs away with me. I live on the edge of Washington with my Mum, my Dad died in a car crash when I was young. Here is my story about the dragon that changed my life which unfortunately no one believes.

“Carter! Come clean up this mess!” “Coming mum”. “I thought you said you were going to clean this up two hours ago” said Miss Jones. “I was but I kind of got distracted” said Carter. “I’m getting tired of your distractions you keep getting”. “What was it this time” said Miss Jones. “I thought I saw something move under my bed that was green and scaly it turn out to be one of my old toys” Carter said quietly. “Ok then clean up this mess dinner will be ready in a minute. Miss Jones walked out and Carter got to work on the mess.

“Good night Carter” Miss Jones said quietly. “Good night Mum” whispers Carter. Miss Jones leaves the room, Carter sighs and stares out the window. Something catches his eye something in the distance just outside washington something huge, it moved, took off in to the air and disappeared. “That was not a plane or a helicopter it had legs and a head it has to be a dragon but dragons don’t exist” carter whispered to him self. Then a 3 second flash appears where it disappeared. “Yep diffidently a dragon” said Carter. BOOM! An explosion happens where the dragon was. “Oh no I’ve got to see this” Carter whispered to himself. As he crept past his mums room he accidentally knocked the pot plant off its little table. he slowly turned to face his mums room, Miss Jones was standing in the door way. “And where do you think you’re going” Miss Jones asked a little annoyed. “I’m going to see what made the explosion outside” Carter said quietly. “No you’re not it’s a school night go back to bed” said Miss Jones. “Ok” carter said a little disheartened and went to bed and fell asleep.

Carter sits down and starts to eat his breakfast. “Carter! Come see this” Miss Jones yells from the living room. Coming mum! Carter yells back. Carter walks in to the living room and sees whats on the TV. “Todays breaking news, a plane has crash landed on the way to Washington” said the news reporter. “luckily no one was killed, we found that the front of the plane was almost completely melted, the pilot claims that something shot fire at them” explained the reporter. “The Dragon” Carter whispered to himself. “Mum I’m going to go to school now!” Carter shouts as he runs out the door.

Bbbbbrrrrrrrriiiiiiiinnnnngggg! go’s the school bell. “ok everybody sit down today were going to talk about the plane crash that happened last night, does anyone have an idea of what might of happened, Susan Macnol” The Teacher said. “Well I think that the front of the plane over heated causing it to melt” said Susan. Susan Macnol is the smart one of the class, she has short blond hair, green eyes, really pail skin, and wears over sized glasses, she’s really annoying and a real showoff. even though Carter didn’t have his hand up the teacher still picked him. “Carter what do you think happened to the plane” the teacher said. “Aaaaaaa” Carter said a little confused, and decided to be honest about what he saw. “I think it might have been a dragon” carter said kind of embarrassed. the class cracked up laughing at him. “Carter! I will not have this kind of irresponsible comments in my class, go to the principles office now, Carter moaned.

Carter walked out the door of the principles office. “Aw man I got a detention all because of that stupid dragon I saw last night”Carter said really annoyed. Kaitlin Lotch came running up behind him yelling “Carter”, Kaitlin Lotch had long brown hair, brown eyes, freckles on her nose, was about twenty center meters taller then Carter, and lived next door to him. Carter turn around, “What do you want, to laugh at me some more” Carter said annoyed. “No I came to tell you that I believe you” Kaitlin said out of breath. Carter was very surprised to here that. “really? why?” Carter said very confused. “Because I saw it to you’re not the only one with a room at the back of the house” Kaitlin said as if he was an idiot. “Oh right”Carter said remembering that she was his next door neighbor. “besides I have something you don’t, proof” she said as she pulled out a camera from her bag. “My proof” Kaitlin said very proud of her self. “Yea but how are we going to prove that’s a dragon people might think that it’s just the plane, well I’m going home” Carter said.

“How was your day today” Miss Jones said cheerly. “I don’t want to talk about it” Carter said feeling down. “what happened” Miss Jones said feeling bad for him. “I said I don’t want to talk about it” Carter said as he walked to his room. As soon as he got in to his room he locked his door and grabbed an empty back pack and jumped out the window. “luckily the dragon wasn’t to far from my house” Carter said to him self. Carter ran into the shed and pulled out his bike, his bike was sprayed painted black, and had lots of dents from prevues crashes (he wasn’t the best bike rider). Carter sped towards where he saw the dragon last, hoping to find some proof that it was a dragon.

Kaitlin was downloading her pitchers on to the computer to take a closer look at them. “I don’t understand theres got to be some way of proving that it’s a dragon in the photo, hang on a moment what’s this” Kaitlin said zooming in to the black spot under the dragon. “It could just be a bird, but birds have wings and this is almost perfectly round, it must be a scale” said Kaitlin. “but just to be sure I need to investigate but first I need an excuse, ah-ha, Rosy!” Yells Kaitlin. In runs a small black dog, Rosy starts chasing her tail. “Mum! Can I take Rosy out for a walk! Kaitlin yells from her room. Ok! But don’t take to long! Miss Lotch yelled back. But instead of walking down the street like her Mum thinks she’s doing she turns round and go’s around the house to look for the scale.

When she got there she saw Carters dented bike. “Carter’s here?”Kaitlin said under her breath. she began to look around, not far in to her search she spotted Carter looking around on the ground

__Thursday 9 june__

**MY LEARNING TARGETS**

My next step in writing is to carefully check punctuation. Cody this is a brilliant story, you caught my attention right from the start. It is a little tricky to read because the first few lines are full of commas.

I will achieve this by using a variety of sentences with full stops and capital letters in the correct places e.g. My name is Carter Jones. I’m a 12 year old boy with dark brown hair, blue eyes, lots of freckles and am the shortest in my class mostly because almost everyone in my class are big apes. I’m reasonably fit, with a wild imagination which sometimes runs away with me. I live on the edge of Washington with my Mum, my Dad died in a car crash when I was young.

Date achieved: //Mrs Stock//

The Dragon

My name is Carter Jones I’m a 12 year old boy that has dark brown hair, blue eyes, lots of freckles, shortest in my class mostly because almost all the people in my class are big apes, I’m a reasonably fit boy with a wild imagination which some times runs away with me, I live on the edge of Washington with my Mum, my Dad died in a car crash when I was young. Here is my story about the dragon that changed my life which unfortunately no one believes.

“Carter! Come clean up this mess!” “Coming mum”. “I thought you said you were going to clean this up two hours ago” said Miss Jones. “I was but I kind of got distracted” said Carter. “I’m getting tired of your distractions you keep getting”. “What was it this time” said Miss Jones. “I thought I saw something move under my bed that was green and scaly it turn out to be one of my old toys” Carter said quietly. “Ok then clean up this mess dinner will be ready in a minute. Miss Jones walked out and Carter got to work on the mess.

“Good night Carter” Miss Jones said quietly. “Good night Mum” whispers Carter. Miss Jones leaves the room, Carter sighs and stares out the window. Something catches his eye something in the distance just outside washington something huge, it moved, took off in to the air and disappeared. “That was not a plane or a helicopter it had legs and a head it has to be a dragon but dragons don’t exist” carter whispered to him self. Then a 3 second flash appears where it disappeared. “Yep diffidently a dragon” said Carter. BOOM! An explosion happens where the dragon was. “Oh no I’ve got to see this” Carter whispered to himself. As he crept past his mums room he accidentally knocked the pot plant off its little table. he slowly turned to face his mums room, Miss Jones was standing in the door way. “And where do you think you’re going” Miss Jones asked a little annoyed. “I’m going to see what made the explosion outside” Carter said quietly. “No you’re not it’s a school night go back to bed” said Miss Jones. “Ok” carter said a little disheartened and went to bed and fell asleep.

Carter sits down and starts to eat his breakfast. “Carter! Come see this” Miss Jones yells from the living room. Coming mum! Carter yells back. Carter walks in to the living room and sees whats on the TV. “Todays breaking news, a plane has crash landed on the way to Washington” said the news reporter. “luckily no one was killed, we found that the front of the plane was almost completely melted, the pilot claims that something shot fire at them” explained the reporter. “The Dragon” Carter whispered to himself. “Mum I’m going to go to school now!” Carter shouts as he runs out the door.

Bbbbbrrrrrrrriiiiiiiinnnnngggg! go’s the school bell. “ok everybody sit down today were going to talk about the plane crash that happened last night, does anyone have an idea of what might of happened, Susan Macnol” The Teacher said. “Well I think that the front of the plane over heated causing it to melt” said Susan. Susan Macnol is the smart one of the class, she has short blond hair, green eyes, really pail skin, and wears over sized glasses, she’s really annoying and a real showoff. even though Carter didn’t have his hand up the teacher still picked him. “Carter what do you think happened to the plane” the teacher said. “Aaaaaaa” Carter said a little confused, and decided to be honest about what he saw. “I think it might have been a dragon” carter said kind of embarrassed. the class cracked up laughing at him. “Carter! I will not have this kind of irresponsible comments in my class, go to the principles office now, Carter moaned.

Carter walked out the door of the principles office. “Aw man I got a detention all because of that stupid dragon I saw last night”Carter said really annoyed. Kaitlin Lotch came running up behind him yelling “Carter”, Kaitlin Lotch had long brown hair, brown eyes, freckles on her nose, was about twenty center meters taller then Carter, and lived next door to him. Carter turn around, “What do you want, to laugh at me some more” Carter said annoyed. “No I came to tell you that I believe you” Kaitlin said out of breath. Carter was very surprised to here that. “really? why?” Carter said very confused. “Because I saw it to you’re not the only one with a room at the back of the house” Kaitlin said as if he was an idiot. “Oh right”Carter said remembering that she was his next door neighbor. “besides I have something you don’t, proof” she said as she pulled out a camera from her bag. “My proof” Kaitlin said very proud of her self. “Yea but how are we going to prove that’s a dragon people might think that it’s just the plane, well I’m going home” Carter said.

“How was your day today” Miss Jones said cheerly. “I don’t want to talk about it” Carter said feeling down. “what happened” Miss Jones said feeling bad for him. “I said I don’t want to talk about it” Carter said as he walked to his room. As soon as he got in to his room he locked his door and grabbed an empty back pack and jumped out the window. “luckily the dragon wasn’t to far from my house” Carter said to him self. Carter ran into the shed and pulled out his bike, his bike was sprayed painted black, and had lots of dents from prevues crashes (he wasn’t the best bike rider). Carter sped towards where he saw the dragon last, hoping to find some proof that it was a dragon.

Kaitlin was downloading her pitchers on to the computer to take a closer look at them. “I don’t understand theres got to be some way of proving that it’s a dragon in the photo, hang on a moment what’s this” Kaitlin said zooming in to the black spot under the dragon. “It could just be a bird, but birds have wings and this is almost perfectly round, it must be a scale” said Kaitlin. “but just to be sure I need to investigate but first I need an excuse, ah-ha, Rosy!” Yells Kaitlin. In runs a small black dog, Rosy starts chasing her tail. “Mum! Can I take Rosy out for a walk! Kaitlin yells from her room. Ok! But don’t take to long! Miss Lotch yelled back. But instead of walking down the street like her Mum thinks she’s doing she turns round and go’s around the house to look for the scale.

When she got there she saw Carters dented bike. “Carter’s here?”Kaitlin said under her breath. she began to look around, not far in to her search she spotted Carter

__friday 20 may 2011__

The Dragon

My name is Carter Jones I’m a 12 year old boy that has dark brown hair, blue eyes, lots of freckles, I’m a fit boy with a wild imagination. Here is my story about my journey which no one believes. Carter! come clean up mess! coming mum. I thought you said you were going to clean